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Magazine:  Roadworks
Acceptance Date:  July '99
Publication Date:  unconfirmed
Comments: 
This is, alongwith Bleeder, my most rejected piece - six times in total, i think.  It was written late one night while i was reading Marilyn Manson's autobiography so there's some pre-Mechanical Animal Manson imagery in there.  Rejection comments included "too overtly fantastical", " a curious piece" and "a little underdeveloped".  On the other hand, Trevor Denyer's acceptance described it as one of the best stories he has read in a long time.  Which is exactly why I've only once changed a piece because of what an editor said.